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Post by magnum on Feb 18, 2010 20:00:42 GMT -5
This is Jake Norton's inner-thoughts here. Leave feedback, and I will love you. <3 I'll update this with every new Jake Norton rp. EpiphanyHysteria, Hysterical
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Post by magnum on Mar 25, 2010 1:17:08 GMT -5
this is why i leave. i don't get feedback.
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Post by markzout on Mar 25, 2010 4:50:31 GMT -5
2 long. did not read.
No, but seriously. With writing my own promos I haven't even tried to take a look at yours yet. I'll be sure to after I post.
I'm sure it's gold, though. After all, you ARE Jake Fuckin' Norton. ________________________________________________________________
Edit:
After reading, I can tell you honestly what I thought. This is just me. I'm not a judge, it's just how I feel.
I absolutely hated the green passage. I HATE to know what's going on in the mind of other characters, because in real life I can't pick your thoughts. I only get what is given to me, via what I see and what I hear. And I get it. You had to get all that out there, but a CD could have gotton the job done fine.
The red passage was cool, though. Well, until you went into graphic detail about Montana's faggotry. Don't get me wrong, accusing other people of being gay is always funny - I just felt you went a bit far and relied on calling him a fag a little too strongly.
Reguardless, it was a fantastic opening with Norton. I loved how I could hear the character speaking as you used the voice VERY well, and I loved how strong your closing statement was. All in all it's a winning promo, I'd just put the green portion in a CD in the future.
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Post by magnum on Mar 25, 2010 14:38:47 GMT -5
I absolutely hated the green passage. I HATE to know what's going on in the mind of other characters, because in real life I can't pick your thoughts. I only get what is given to me, via what I see and what I hear. And I get it. You had to get all that out there, but a CD could have gotton the job done fine. that's why i do shoots, brah but about the green passage. back in absolute pro, my previous fed, i have found that people get realistic with information. there are ways to work around character development and picks out info for your shoots. my CD's are currently all being worked from the past, so people have written against my character as if they are picking info out of the past. But Jake is indeed in the green passages. It just hasn't been made known yet. I'm a storyteller. That's what I like doing. thanks for the feedback +1
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