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Post by indyfields on Mar 7, 2010 2:49:12 GMT -5
Alright, I placed up a debut. Be as harsh as possible - please do. I am rusty as heel, have not done this is almost a year. No shoot part of this since it is a debut, but pleace be honest, Thanks.
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Post by indyfields on Mar 30, 2010 1:27:28 GMT -5
Feedback on any of my Hysteria roleplays. Just getting back into the groove since was off for months. Be honest, just trying to improve.
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Post by onitamago on Mar 30, 2010 1:31:47 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading your roleplays and yes, you have improved a lot since you first came here. I think Peterson is one hell of a character and you're doing a great job so far writing him. You really have developed his storyline over time. ^_^
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